10 IELTS Writing Tips From Examiners Teachers Students Improve Your IELTS Score

Hi, I’m Martin.

Welcome to Oxford Online English!

In this lesson, you can get ten essential
tips for your IELTS writing exam.

How’s this video different?

Well, we collected feedback from students
who took IELTS, and also interviewed IELTS

examiners.

Our aim is to give you the most up-to-date
IELTS advice, and also give you tips which

you might not find elsewhere.

We’ve also included our own top tips, which
we’ve developed through teaching hundreds

of IELTS candidates.

You can study with us too, if you want; book
classes on Oxford Online English dot com.

One more thing, do you want English subtitles
while watching this video?

Turn them on now if you like.

If your overall IELTS score is between two
bands, your score is rounded up.

For example, if you score 7-7-7-6 in the four
sections, you’ll get band seven overall.

In the writing exam, it probably doesn’t
work the same way.

Why ‘probably’?

Well, there’s no clear information publicly
available, and even the examiners we spoke

to weren’t sure.

However, according to the best information
we have: if you score seven for task achievement,

seven for coherence/cohesion, seven for vocabulary
and six for grammar in your writing exam,

that will be rounded down to 6.5.

What does this mean for you?

It means that you can’t have any major weaknesses.

If your target score is seven, you probably
need to score seven in all four areas.

Do you make multiple small grammar errors
when you write?

This will likely limit your grammar score
to six.

If you get one score of six, then getting
band seven overall becomes much more difficult.

OK, if you score band eight in one area, then
you can score band six somewhere else and

still get seven.

However, it’s rare that we see students
with some scores much higher than others.

Generally, the four scores – TA, C&C, vocabulary
and grammar – are close together.

So, if your target score is, for example,
seven, you need to aim for seven in all four

areas.

Find your weakest area, find out what you
need to do to hit your target score, and give

it extra focus when preparing.

In the past, IELTS examiners would count how
many words you had written, and apply a penalty

to your TA score if you hadn’t written enough.

They no longer do this.

No one will count your words.

So, you shouldn’t do this in the exam, either.

Why did they change?

The idea is that you can’t write a full
answer while writing less than the word count,

and this will be reflected in your TA score
anyway; there’s no need for an extra word

count penalty.

So, focus on writing full, well-developed
answers which answer every part of the task.

Don’t worry about word count.

This applies to the exam.

When practising, you should count your words.

However, don’t focus on the word count as
a number.

If you find it difficult to meet the word
count, this strongly suggests that you aren’t

answering the task fully.

Ask yourself: what could you add?

What ideas could you explain in more depth?

How long do you think the examiner will spend
reading your writing?

It depends, but the basic answer is: “not
long.”

Examiners we spoke to said they spent around
five minutes per task on average; one mentioned

that he has heard of examiners spending only
three minutes per task.

If I’m marking some IELTS writing, I need
ten to fifteen minutes to do a thorough job.

If the examiner is spending only five minutes
– or less – then they’re not reading

everything carefully.

What does this mean for you?

It means you should follow obvious strategies.

Don’t experiment; give the examiner what
they’re expecting to see.

For example, in general task one, write a
separate paragraph for each bullet point in

the task.

In academic task one, put your overview in
a separate paragraph near the start of your

answer.

In task two, start each body paragraph with
a clear topic sentence.

You don’t have to do these things to get
high scores, but most people follow these

methods.

If you take a different approach, examiners
might not take the time to read your work

carefully and understand what you’re doing.

Keep it simple!

It’s hopefully obvious that if you can’t
write a high-scoring IELTS answer in two hours,

then you can’t do it in one hour, either.

Often, IELTS students try to write with a
time limit, like in the exam.

Of course, the time limit is important.

But, if your writing has problems, then you
should fix the problems first, and worry about

the time later.

For example, many IELTS students we meet have
big problems with TA in task two.

Often, the problems relate to planning and
organising ideas.

When we start practising, it’s common for
students to need thirty minutes – or sometimes

longer – just to plan one task two answer.

If this is your situation, then don’t worry
about time limits at first.

Focus on writing an answer at your target
band score.

If it takes three hours, then OK.

Once you can consistently hit your target
band score, then start training for speed.

Here’s a common question which IELTS students
ask: how do I get ideas for my essay in task

two?

I don’t know.

You need to solve that problem.

If you’re in the exam, and you read the
task two question, and you think “I don’t

have anything to say about this”, then you’re
in a bad position.

There’s not much that can help you at that
moment.

You need to prepare for this before the
exam.

So, what should you do?

First, read as many task two questions as
you can, and think about them.

Second, if you don’t have a strong opinion,
then try to find some news articles on the

same topic.

Read articles with different opinions, and
think about what you do or don’t agree with,

and why.

If you have someone to practise speaking with,
then debating is also helpful.

Take a topic; you and your partner choose
one side each.

Then, you have a debate, you try to support
your side and argue against your partner’s

points.

Third, here’s a useful exercise: take a
task two question and write two practice essays

on opposite sides.

For example, look at this question.

To practise, write two essays.

The first argues that climate change is the
most serious environmental problem facing

humanity, and the second argues that other
environmental issues are equally serious.

Sound like a lot of work?

It is!

But, to score seven or higher in task two,
you need detailed, well-supported ideas in

your essay.

There’s no short cut.

A question: what score will you get if your
essay is not 100% on topic?

IELTS examiners have a term: ‘on-topic,
off-task’.

They use this for essays which are in the
right general area, but which don’t answer

the question directly.

Such essays are limited to band four for TA,
and five for C&C, maximum. This problem

applies to many of the IELTS essays we see
from our students.

You must train yourself to read the question
carefully.

Think about every single word.

For example, look at the task two you saw
just now.

Before you can even think about this question,
you need to think about some of the ideas.

For example, what do ‘serious’ and ‘important’
mean here?

What does it mean for one environmental problem
to be more serious than another?

What are ‘other environmental issues’?

These are not simple questions.

We often see IELTS students who start writing
without thinking about these things.

Then, they write an on-topic, off-task essay.

It’s easy to do.

You might be watching this thinking: “That
wouldn’t happen to me!”

It might.

It’s one of the biggest and most common
problems we see.

Look at a task two question.

Now, look at a different version.

Can you see the difference?

In the task two instructions, it matters whether
a word is singular or plural.

For example, if the task asks you to describe
‘the main problem’, then you need to focus

on one, and only one, problem.

If the task asks you to describe ‘problems’,
then you should include at least two.

The same is true with other words you’ll
see in many IELTS questions, like ‘benefits’,

‘advantages’, ‘disadvantages’, and
so on.

Pay attention to whether the word is singular
or plural.

Stronger answers – band eight or nine – tend
to be longer, especially in task two.

It’s quite difficult to write a full, well-developed
essay answer in only 250 words.

Remember also that there’s no upper limit.

Of course, you need to be careful that your
essay is well-organised, with logical paragraphing

and a clear progression from the beginning
to the end.

So, if you’re aiming for higher scores – 7.5
or above – you should probably be aiming

to write a longer response in task 2.

Writing more allows you to develop your ideas
in more depth and

use a wider range of vocabulary -

both of which are necessary for the highest band.

Sometimes, you’ll hear IELTS advice like
‘your ideas don’t matter, so long as they’re

relevant’, or ‘it doesn’t matter if
what you write is true or not’.

We might even have said similar things in
the past!

This advice is true to a point; if your target
is band six, then sure, this advice is fine.

If you’re aiming for higher scores – seven
and higher – then you can’t think like

this.

Your ideas matter.

Not all relevant ideas are equal.

Ideas which are more focused, more detailed,
and better-supported are better for your TA

score.

If you’re aiming for band seven plus, you
should approach your task two essay in this

way: imagine you’re writing for someone
who has the opposite opinion to you, and you

really want to convince them to change their
mind.

We sometimes see questions about academic
task one like: “How do I deal with a bar

chart question?”

“What do I do with a map question?”

And so on.

Actually, you can approach all academic task
one questions the same way.

Imagine you’re writing for someone who can’t
see the chart, or the map, or whatever.

Now, imagine that this person is going to
read what you’ve written, and try to draw

the chart.

Can this imaginary person do it?

Can they recreate the chart, using only what
you’ve written?

If they can, then you’ve written a high-scoring
answer, at least for TA and probably C&C.

So, don’t overthink it.

Write your answer with this idea in your head.

Your task one writing will improve immediately.

We’ve seen this work with many students!

Wait, what?

Only one task one tip?

IELTS students don’t generally have so many
problems with task one, either academic or

general.

And, the problems they do have are relatively
easy to fix.

So yes, we only have one major task one tip.

But OK, here are two quick bonus tips for
task one.

For task one general, the most common problem
we see is tone – meaning how formal or informal

your language is.

People either write in an inappropriate tone
– in most cases, this means using language

which is too formal for the task – or, they
mix formal and informal language in their

answer.

For high task one scores, your tone needs
to be both appropriate and consistent.

For task one academic, learn some phrases
to describe statistics and figures.

Many academic task ones are quite similar:
you need to describe trends and data.

This requires a limited range of language,
which you can – and should – prepare for.

For example, do you know any words which have
the same meaning as ‘increase’?

What’s the difference between ‘rise’
and ‘raise’?

Finding the answers to these questions will
help you to write a better task one answer

in the academic writing exam.

That’s all.

Thanks for watching!

See you next time!

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在本课中,您可以获得
雅思写作考试的十个基本技巧。

这个视频有什么不同?

好吧,我们收集
了参加雅思的学生的反馈,还采访了雅思

考官。

我们的目标是为您提供最新的
雅思建议,并为您提供

其他地方可能找不到的提示。

我们还包括了我们自己的重要技巧,这些技巧是
我们通过教授

数百名雅思考生而开发的。

如果你愿意,你也可以和我们一起学习;
在 Oxford Online English dot com 上预订课程。

还有一件事,你
看这个视频的时候想要英文字幕吗?

如果您愿意,请立即打开它们。

如果您的雅思总分介于两个分数之间
,则您的分数会向上取整。

例如,如果您在四个
部分中得分 7-7-7-6,您将获得总分 7。

在写作考试中,它可能不会
以同样的方式工作。

为什么是“可能”?

好吧,没有公开的明确
信息,甚至我们采访的考官

也不确定。

但是,根据我们掌握的最佳信息
:如果您在写作考试中的任务成绩

为 7 分,连贯性/连贯性为 7 分,词汇为 7 分
,语法为 6 分

,则将四舍五入 down 至 6.5。

这对你意味着什么?

这意味着你不能有任何重大弱点。

如果您的目标分数是 7,那么您可能
需要在所有四个方面都获得 7 分。

你写作时是否犯了多个小语法错误

这可能会将您的语法分数限制
为六分。

如果你得到一个 6 分,那么
整体上获得第 7 级就变得更加困难。

好的,如果您在一个区域中获得八级,那么
您可以在其他地方获得六级,

但仍能获得七级。

但是,我们很少看到
某些学生的分数远高于其他学生。

一般来说,四个分数——TA、C&C、词汇
和语法——是接近的。

因此,例如,如果您的目标分数是
7,那么您需要在所有四个方面都以 7 为目标

找到你最薄弱的领域,找出你
需要做些什么来达到你的目标分数,并

在准备时给予额外的关注。

过去,雅思考官会统计
你写了多少字,

如果你写的不够多,就会对你的 TA 分数进行惩罚。

他们不再这样做了。

没有人会数你的话。

所以,你也不应该在考试中这样做。

他们为什么变了?

这个想法是,当你
写的字数少于字数时,你不能写一个完整的答案

,这无论如何都会反映在你的 TA 分数中
; 不需要额外的

字数惩罚。

因此,请专注于编写完整、完善的
答案,以回答任务的每个部分。

不用担心字数。

这适用于考试。

练习时,你应该数你的话。

但是,不要将字数
视为数字。

如果你发现很难达到
字数,这强烈表明你没有

完全回答任务。

问问自己:你能补充什么?

您可以更深入地解释哪些想法?

你认为考官会花多长时间
阅读你的文章?

这取决于,但基本的答案是:“不
长。”

我们采访过的考官说,他们
平均每项任务花费大约 5 分钟; 其中一位

提到他听说考官
每项任务只花费三分钟。

如果我要批一些雅思写作,我需要
十到十五分钟才能完成一项彻底的工作。

如果考官只花五
分钟或更短的时间,那么他们就没有

仔细阅读所有内容。

这对你意味着什么?

这意味着您应该遵循明显的策略。

不要实验; 给考官
他们期望看到的东西。

例如,在一般任务一中,
为任务中的每个要点写一个单独的段落

在学术任务一中,将您的概述
放在答案开头附近的单独段落中

在任务二中,
以清晰的主题句开始每个正文段落。

您不必必须做这些事情来获得
高分,但大多数人都遵循这些

方法。

如果你采取不同的方法,考官
可能不会花时间仔细阅读你的作品

并理解你在做什么。

把事情简单化!

很明显,如果你不能
在两个小时内写出高分的雅思答案,

那么你也不能在一小时内完成。

通常,雅思学生会尝试有
时间限制写作,就像在考试中一样。

当然,时间限制很重要。

但是,如果你的写作有问题,那么你
应该先解决问题,然后再

担心时间。

例如,我们遇到的许多雅思学生
在任务二中的助教方面存在很大问题。

通常,问题与计划和
组织想法有关。

当我们开始练习时,
学生通常需要 30 分钟(有时甚至

更长时间)来计划一项任务两个答案。

如果这是您的情况,那么首先不要
担心时间限制。

专注于在你的目标乐队分数上写一个答案

如果需要三个小时,那么可以。

一旦你可以一致地达到你的目标
乐队分数,然后开始训练速度。

这是雅思学生经常问的一个问题
:我如何在任务二中获得我的论文的想法

我不知道。

你需要解决这个问题。

如果你在考试中,并且阅读了
第二题,并且认为“

我对此无话可说”,那么你的处境就很
糟糕。

在那一刻,没有什么可以帮助你的

您需要考试前为此做好准备

那你该怎么办?

首先,尽可能多地阅读任务两个
问题,然后思考它们。

其次,如果你没有强烈的意见,
那就试着找一些关于

同一主题的新闻文章。

阅读有不同观点的文章,
想想你做什么或不同意什么,

以及为什么。

如果你有人练习与你交谈,
那么辩论也很有帮助。

取一个话题; 您和您的伴侣各选择
一方。

然后,您进行辩论,您尝试支持
您的一方并反对您的合作伙伴的

观点。

第三,这是一个有用的练习:做一个
任务两个问题,并在对面写两篇练习论文

例如,看看这个问题。

练习,写两篇文章。

第一个认为气候变化是人类
面临的最严重的环境问题

,第二个认为其他
环境问题同样严重。

听起来工作量很大?

它是!

但是,要在任务 2 中获得 7 分或更高的分数,
您的论文中需要详细的、有充分支持的想法

没有捷径可走。

一个问题:如果你的
论文不是 100% 的主题,你会得到多少分?

雅思考官有一个术语:‘on-topic,
off-task’。

他们将其用于
正确的一般领域但不

直接回答问题的论文。

此类论文仅限于 TA 4 级,
C&C 5 级,*最大值。*这个问题

适用于我们从学生那里看到的许多雅思论文

你必须训练自己仔细阅读问题

想想每一个字

比如你刚才看到的任务二

在您甚至可以考虑这个问题之前,
您需要考虑一些想法。

例如,这里的“严重”和“重要”
是什么意思?

一个环境
问题比另一个更严重意味着什么?

什么是“其他环境问题”?

这些不是简单的问题。

我们经常看到雅思的学生
不考虑这些就开始写作。

然后,他们写一篇题外话,题外话。

这很容易做到。

你可能会看到这样的想法:“这
不会发生在我身上!”

它可能。

这是我们看到的最大和最常见的
问题之一。

看一个任务二题。

现在,看一个不同的版本。

你能看到区别么?

在任务二指令中,
单词是单数还是复数很重要。

例如,如果任务要求您描述
“主要问题”,那么您需要专注

于一个问题,并且只关注一个问题。

如果任务要求您描述“问题”,
那么您应该至少包括两个。


会在许多雅思问题中看到的其他词也是如此,例如“好处”、

“优势”、“劣势”
等。

注意单词是单数
还是复数。

更强的答案——第八或第九级——
往往更长,尤其是在任务二中。

仅用 250 字写出完整、完善的论文答案是相当困难的

还要记住,没有上限。

当然,你需要注意你的
文章组织良好,有逻辑的段落

和从头到尾的清晰进展

所以,如果你的目标是更高的分数
——7.5 或以上——你可能应该

在任务 2 中写一个更长的答案。写得

越多,你可以更深入地发展你的
想法并

使用更广泛的词汇——

两者都是 这是最高频段所必需的。

有时,你会听到一些雅思建议,比如
“你的想法无关紧要,只要它们是

相关的”,或者“
你写的东西是否真实并不重要”。

我们过去甚至可能说过类似的
话!

这个建议在一定程度上是正确的; 如果您的目标
是六级,那么当然,这个建议很好。

如果你的目标是更高的分数——七分
或更高——那么你不能这样

想。

你的想法很重要。

并非所有相关的想法都是平等的。

更专注、更详细、
得到更好支持的想法更适合你的 TA

分数。

如果你的目标是七级以上,你
应该以这种方式处理你的任务二

:想象你正在为一个
与你意见相反的人写作,而你

真的想说服他们改变
主意。

我们有时会看到有关学术
任务的问题,例如:“我如何处理

条形图问题?”

“我该怎么处理地图问题?”

等等。

实际上,您可以以相同的方式处理所有学术任务
一的问题。

想象一下,你正在为一个
看不到图表、地图或其他任何东西的人写作。

现在,想象这个人会
读你写的东西,然后试着

画出图表。

这个想象中的人能做到吗?

他们可以仅使用您编写的内容重新创建图表
吗?

如果他们可以,那么您已经写了一个高分
答案,至少对于 TA 和可能是 C&C。

所以,不要想太多。

带着这个想法写下你的答案。

你的任务一写作将立即得到改善。

我们和很多学生一起看过这个作品!

等等,什么?

只有一个任务一个提示?

雅思学生通常不会
在任务一上遇到太多问题,无论是学术上的还是

一般的。

而且,他们确实存在的问题相对
容易解决。

所以,是的,我们只有一个主要任务一个提示。

但是好的,这里有两个
任务一的快速奖励提示。

对于任务一一般来说,我们看到的最常见的问题
是语气——这意味着

你的语言有多正式或非正式。

人们要么用不恰当的语气写作
——在大多数情况下,这意味着使用

对任务来说过于正式的语言——或者,
他们在回答中混合了正式和非正式的语言

对于高分任务,你的语气
需要既恰当又一致。

对于第一项学术任务,学习一些短语
来描述统计数据和数字。

许多学术任务非常相似:
您需要描述趋势和数据。

这需要有限的语言范围
,您可以而且应该做好准备。

例如,您知道
与“增加”具有相同含义的任何单词吗?

“升”
和“升”有什么区别?

找到这些问题的答案将
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就这样。

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