IELTS Writing Improve Your Grammar Score

Hi, I’m Oli.

Welcome to Oxford Online English!

In this lesson, you can learn how to improve
your grammar for the IELTS writing exam.

You’ll see exactly what resources you need
to improve your grammar score for IELTS writing.

You’ll also get a practical plan which you
can follow.

If you haven’t already seen our website,
then you should go and take a look!

We have free IELTS preparation lessons, and
you can also find a professional teacher who

can help you to prepare for your IELTS exam.

But now, you’re going to see a three-step
plan for working on your IELTS grammar.

First, we want you to understand two things.

One, do you know how IELTS grammar scores
work?

You can read the IELTS score scheme, which
is available online, but here’s a summary.

Your grammar score depends on two things:
range and accuracy.

‘Range’ means the variety of sentence
patterns which you use.

If you only write in short, simple sentences,
or if you repeat the same sentence patterns,

you’ll get a lower score.

To get a higher score, you need to use a wide
range of sentence patterns.

Accuracy includes the quantity of mistakes
you make, where you make them, and whether

your mistakes affect communication or not.

What does this mean for IELTS scores?

If you only use simple sentence structures,
or if you make a large number of mistakes,

then you’ll get band five or lower for grammar.

If you try to use more complex sentence structures,
and if your meaning is clear in spite of your

mistakes, then you’ll get band six.

To get band seven, you need both good range
and good accuracy.

You need to use a wide range of sentence patterns
without making many mistakes.

Above band seven, it’s a question of degree:
you need wider range and better accuracy.

Our second important point before you see
your three-step study plan: you need the right

resources to practise.

You need: a good reference book, a source
of IELTS writing tasks, an understanding of

how to learn grammar in context, a memorisation
tool, and a source of feedback.

Let’s look at these one by one.

You need a good grammar reference book.

The best is the most popular: English Grammar
in Use by Raymond Murphy.

This is the intermediate version, which has
a blue cover.

The elementary and advanced versions are also
useful.

You need a source of IELTS writing tasks.

Cambridge publish books with past exam papers;
you can also type ‘IELTS writing tasks’

into Google or another search engine, and
you’ll find plenty of results.

You need to know how to learn grammar in context.

This means you need to learn grammar by understanding
and producing full, meaningful sentences.

We explained how to do this in another video,
which you should watch now if you haven’t

already.

You need a memorisation tool.

Language learning partly depends on memorisation,
and memorisation is often slow and inefficient.

We’ve also talked about this in other videos,
but the best solution is a digital flashcard

app such as Anki.

Invest some time and learn how to use Anki
or a similar tool, because this will save

you time and frustration later.

Finally, you need a source of feedback.

This probably means you need a professional
teacher.

I know many of you want to study independently,
but it’s extremely difficult to improve

your grammatical accuracy without feedback.

To put it simply: if you don’t know when
you make a mistake, then there’s no way

to correct it.

You need someone who can show you where you’re
making mistakes, and explain the reasons why.

Once you have these four things, you’re
ready to start with our three-step plan.

Let’s look at step one!

The IELTS scoring system differentiates simple
and complex sentences.

Here, ‘simple’ means that a sentence only
has one clause, with one main verb.

For example, these are simple sentences: ‘Fruit
is good for you.’

‘I am writing to ask for three days off
work next month.’

‘People from different cultures and backgrounds
can have very different attitudes towards

the role of marriage in a society.’

Note that ‘simple’ relates to sentence
structure, not length.

‘Simple’ sentences can be shorter or longer.

The important point is that simple sentences
have one and only one main verb.

In your IELTS writing exam, the first step
is to learn to write simple sentences accurately.

If you can’t do this, your grammar score
will be limited to band six maximum.

So, how can you practise this skill?

Find an IELTS writing task; write your answer,
but you need to follow some rules.

One: you can’t use any conjunctions.

That includes simple words like ‘and’,
‘but’, ‘so’, as well as subordinating

conjunctions like ‘although’ or ‘because’.

No conjunctions!

Two: you can’t use commas.

That doesn’t mean that you need commas but
you don’t use them, it means that you never

need a comma.

Commas in the greeting of general task one
are OK.

Three: you can’t use the words ‘that’,
‘than’, ‘which’ or ‘if’.

What’s the point of these rules?

Can you work it out?

The idea is to write your answer using only
simple sentences.

A common problem for IELTS students is that
they try to use complex sentence structures,

but they can’t write simple sentences accurately.

If you can’t form simple sentences without
making mistakes, then you can’t form more

complex sentences without making mistakes.

So, write your answer, and get feedback, for
example from a teacher.

See how many mistakes you make, and where
they are.

What next?

You’ll probably find that you made more
mistakes than you expected.

That’s fine; don’t worry about it.

Think about what you can do next.

First, you need to learn and practise any
grammar points which you don’t understand

well.

Look through your mistakes, or ask your teacher,
and see if you repeat similar mistakes.

Use your grammar book to read and do exercises
on any topics which are weak.

Secondly, you need to practise again.

Find a new IELTS writing task and write your
answer.

As a first step, aim to get 50% of your sentences
error-free.

That means zero errors, including small mistakes.

Once you can do this, aim to get 75% of your
sentences error-free.

Next, work on the total number of errors.

If 75% of your sentences are correct, and
you make a total of ten errors in the remaining

sentences, try to write an IELTS answer which
only has five errors total.

The exact numbers are flexible.

What’s important is that you set yourself
a target which represents progress for you.

If you make 50 mistakes in your first attempt,
then making 30 mistakes would be progress.

It depends on you and where you’re starting.

This step might take you a long time.

Although we’re talking about ‘simple’
sentences, you need a lot of grammar knowledge

to get through this.

You need to be able to use all common verb
tenses, modal verbs, prepositions, articles,

and more.

However, don’t be impatient!

This step is the foundation of your preparation.

Remember: if you can’t write simple sentences
accurately, then you can’t do anything more

complex.

If your target score is seven or higher, you
need to work on this step until you can do

it consistently.

When you can write an IELTS answer using only
simple sentences and without making many mistakes,

you’re ready to move on to step two.

At step two, you’re going to do the same
things, but the rules are different.

Here are some suggested rules: for step two:

One: you can use any coordinating conjunctions.

That means ‘and’, ‘but’, ‘so’
and ‘or’.

Two: you can use two or three subordinating
conjunctions.

We suggest you start with ‘because’, ‘although’
and ‘in order to’.

Three: you can use ‘when’, ‘if’ and
‘than’.

Just with these simple rules, your range is
now much wider.

You can now connect simple sentences using
coordinating conjunctions.

For example: ‘Social media allows us to
connect with others more easily, but it can

also lead to feelings of loneliness and disconnection.’

You can form complex sentences with subordinate
conjunctions.

For example: ‘Although social media does
not normally cost money to use, its numerous

disadvantages mean that it should not be considered
‘free.’’

You can make conditional sentences with ‘if’;
for example: ‘If social media is used responsibly

and moderately, it can be a great tool for
meeting new people.’

You can also make comparatives, using ‘than’,
as in: ‘Some people argue that social media

has made face-to-face communication less important
than in the past, but I do not agree.’

So, you have more tools to use when writing.

However, your general task is the same: find
an IELTS writing task, write your answer,

and get feedback.

During this step, you need to make sure you’re
using ALL of the language in the rules.

We said in the rules that you can use these
things, but actually, you should try to use

every rule at least once.

That means that your answer should have at
least
one sentence with a coordinating conjunction,

at least one sentence with a subordinating
conjunction, and at least one sentence with

‘when’, ‘if’ or ‘than’.

If you can do that, then set yourself a new
target: make two sentences for each rule,

then three sentences, and so on.

If you did the work on step one, then your
writing should be quite accurate.

However, you also need to think about accuracy.

Set yourself targets like you did in step
one; for example, aim to get over 75% of your

sentences error-free, or aim to make less
than ten errors in total.

The idea here is to start using more complex
sentence patterns, but in a controlled way.

There are still rules and limits, making it
easier to focus on accuracy.

However, your writing is hopefully now closer
to natural writing, with a wider range of

sentence forms.

During this step, you can be flexible with
the rules to make this easier or more difficult

for you.

If you find it difficult, then just use one
or two rules at the beginning.

If you find this step easy, then you can make
the rules more complex, for example by using

a wider range of conjunctions.

You can also add more rules.

When you start doing this, you’re ready
for step three.

Step three is similar to step two, but you
need to add more rules, so that you need to

use a wider range of structures in each piece
of writing.

Remember that the rules are not just what
you can use; you must use each rule at

least once.

Here are some possible rules you could add:

Use a relative clause with ‘which’ or
‘that’.

Use a passive sentence.

Use a second conditional sentence.

Use a comparative with ‘as…as…’

These are just suggestions; there are other
possibilities!

Continue practising as before: find a task,
write your answer, and get feedback.

If you can write your answer with a high level
of accuracy, add another rule.

If your accuracy gets worse, then practise
with the same rules until you can write an

accurate answer.

You may need to work on specific grammar points
if you have weaknesses.

That’s the system; follow these steps and
your grammar will get stronger, and this will

improve your IELTS writing score.

We imagine it would be useful for your speaking
score, too.

However, we imagine some of you have questions
or objections, like: ‘How long will all

of this take?’

‘This seems like too much work!

Do I need to do all this?’

‘Do I really need a teacher to get feedback?’

To answer these: it will take a long time.

The exact amount of time depends on you, but
expect to spend several months working on

this.

Do you need to do all of these things?

It depends on your score target, and how much
time you have.

Here’s the key fact: if you can’t use
a wide range of sentence patterns, and if

you can’t write simple sentences accurately,
then you’ll struggle to get more than six

for your grammar score.

This is the exact situation which many of
the IELTS students we meet find themselves

in.

Finally, you need feedback from somewhere;
it’s essential.

Feedback can come from a teacher or from elsewhere,
but it’s difficult to get from other sources.

If your IELTS result is important to you,
then we recommend finding the best teacher

you can.

Without a teacher, your potential progress
will be much slower.

Do you have any other tips for improving your
grammar for IELTS writing?

Please share your ideas in the comments!

Thanks for watching!

See you next time!

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在本课中,您可以学习如何提高
雅思写作考试的语法。

您将确切
了解提高雅思写作语法分数所需的资源。

您还将获得一个可以遵循的实用计划

如果您还没有看过我们的网站,
那么您应该去看看!

我们有免费的雅思备考课程,
您也可以找到专业的

老师帮助您备考雅思考试。

但是现在,您将看到一个学习
雅思语法的三步计划。

首先,我们希望您了解两件事。

一、你知道雅思语法成绩是如何
工作的吗?

您可以阅读在线提供的雅思评分方案
,但这里有一个摘要。

你的语法分数取决于两件事:
范围和准确性。

“范围”是
指您使用的各种句型。

如果你只写简短的句子,
或者重复相同的句型,

你会得到较低的分数。

要获得更高的分数,您需要使用
广泛的句型。

准确性包括您犯的错误数量、
犯错的位置以及

您的错误是否影响沟通。

这对雅思成绩意味着什么?

如果你只使用简单的句子结构,
或者如果你犯了很多错误,

那么你的语法会得到五级或更低。

如果您尝试使用更复杂的句子结构,
并且尽管您犯了错误,但您的意思仍然很清楚

,那么您将获得六分。

要获得第 7 波段,您需要良好的射程
和良好的准确度。

您需要使用广泛的句型,
而不会犯很多错误。

在七级以上,这是一个程度的问题:
你需要更宽的范围和更好的精度。

在您看到您的三步学习计划之前,我们的第二个重点是
:您需要正确的

资源来练习。

你需要:一本好的参考书、
雅思写作任务的来源、了解

如何在上下文中学习语法、记忆
工具和反馈来源。

让我们一一来看看。

你需要一本好的语法参考书。

最好的就是最受欢迎的:
雷蒙德·墨菲(Raymond Murphy)使用的英语语法。

这是中间版本,有
一个蓝色的封面。

初级和高级版本也
很有用。

您需要雅思写作任务的来源。

剑桥出版带有过去试卷的书籍;
你也可以

在谷歌或其他搜索引擎中输入“雅思写作任务”,
你会发现很多结果。

你需要知道如何在上下文中学习语法。

这意味着您需要通过理解
和产生完整、有意义的句子来学习语法。

我们在另一个视频中解释了如何执行此操作
,如果您还没有观看,请立即观看

你需要一个记忆工具。

语言学习部分依赖于记忆,
而记忆通常是缓慢且低效的。

我们在其他视频中也谈到了这一点,
但最好的解决方案是数字抽

认卡应用程序,例如 Anki。

花一些时间学习如何使用 Anki
或类似的工具,因为这样可以节省

您的时间和日后的挫败感。

最后,您需要一个反馈来源。

这可能意味着您需要一位专业的
老师。

我知道你们中的许多人都想独立学习,
但是如果

没有反馈,很难提高语法准确性。

简单地说:如果你不知道自己什么
时候犯了错误,那么就没有

办法纠正它。

你需要有人可以告诉你你在哪里
犯错,并解释原因。

一旦你有了这四样东西,你就
可以开始我们的三步计划了。

让我们看第一步!

雅思评分系统区分简单
句和复杂句。

在这里,“简单”意味着一个句子
只有一个从句,一个主要动词。

例如,这些是简单的句子:“
水果对你有好处。”“

我写信要求
下个月请假三天。”

“来自不同文化和背景

的人对婚姻在一个家庭中的作用可能有非常不同的态度。 社会。”

请注意,“简单”与句子
结构有关,而不是长度。

“简单”的句子可以更短或更长。

重要的一点是简单的句子
只有一个主要动词。

在你的雅思写作考试中,第一步
是学会准确地写出简单的句子。

如果你不能做到这一点,你的语法分数
将被限制在最高六级。

那么,如何练习这项技能呢?

找一个雅思写作任务; 写下你的答案,
但你需要遵守一些规则。

一:你不能使用任何连词。

这包括像“and”、
“but”、“so”这样的简单词,以及

像“although”或“because”这样的从属连词。

没有连词!

二:不能用逗号。

这并不意味着您需要逗号但
您不使用它们,这意味着您永远

不需要逗号。

一般任务一的问候语中的逗号
是可以的。

三:不能使用“that”、
“than”、“which”或“if”等词。

这些规则的意义何在?

你能解决吗?

这个想法是用简单的句子来写你的答案

雅思学生的一个常见问题是
他们尝试使用复杂的句子结构,

但他们无法准确地写出简单的句子。

如果你不能在不犯错误的情况下形成简单的句子
,那么你就不能在

不犯错误的情况下形成更复杂的句子。

所以,写下你的答案,并获得反馈,
例如来自老师的反馈。

看看你犯了多少错误,以及
它们在哪里。

接下来是什么?

你可能会发现你犯的
错误比你预期的要多。

没关系; 别担心。

想想你接下来能做什么。

首先,您需要学习和练习任何
您不太了解的语法点

查看你的错误,或者问你的老师
,看看你是否重复类似的错误。

使用你的语法书阅读
任何薄弱的主题并做练习。

其次,你需要再次练习。

找一个新的雅思写作任务并写下你的
答案。

作为第一步,目标是让 50% 的句子没有
错误。

这意味着零错误,包括小错误。

一旦你能做到这一点,目标是让你的 75% 的
句子没有错误。

接下来,处理错误的总数。

如果你 75% 的句子是正确的,并且
你在剩下的句子中总共犯了 10 个错误

,试着写一个
总共只有 5 个错误的雅思答案。

确切的数字是灵活的。

重要的是你给自己设定
一个代表你进步的目标。

如果你在第一次尝试中犯了 50 个错误,
那么犯了 30 个错误就是进步。

这取决于你和你从哪里开始。

这一步可能需要很长时间。

尽管我们谈论的是“简单”的
句子,但您需要大量的语法知识

才能通过它。

您需要能够使用所有常见的动词
时态、情态动词、介词、冠词

等。

但是,不要急躁!

这一步是你准备的基础。

记住:如果你不能准确地写出简单的句子
,那么你就不能做更

复杂的事情。

如果你的目标分数是 7 分或更高,你
需要继续这一步,直到你能

始终如一地做到这一点。

当你可以只用
简单的句子写出雅思答案并且不会犯很多错误时,

你就可以进入第二步了。

在第二步,你要做同样的
事情,但规则不同。

以下是一些建议的规则: 对于第二步:

一:你可以使用任何并列连词。

这意味着“和”、“但是”、“所以”
和“或”。

二:可以使用两个或三个从属
连词。

我们建议您从“因为”、“虽然”
和“为了”开始。

三:可以使用“when”、“if”和
“than”。

有了这些简单的规则,你的范围
现在就更广了。

您现在可以使用并列连词连接简单的句子

例如:“社交媒体让我们
更容易与他人建立联系,但它

也会导致孤独感和脱节感。”

你可以用从属连词组成复杂的句子

例如:“虽然社交媒体
通常不花钱使用,但它的众多

缺点意味着它不应该被认为是
‘免费的’。”

你可以用‘if’造条件句;
例如:“如果社交媒体以负责任

和适度的方式使用,它可以成为
结识新朋友的好工具。”

您也可以使用“than”进行比较,
例如:“有些人认为社交媒体

已经面子- 面对面的交流
不如过去重要,但我不同意。

所以,你在写作时有更多的工具可以使用。

但是,你的一般任务是一样的:找
一个雅思写作任务,写下你的答案,

然后得到反馈。

在此步骤中,您需要确保
使用规则中的所有语言。

我们在规则中说过你可以使用这些
东西,但实际上,你应该尝试

至少使用每个规则一次。

这意味着你的答案应该有*
至少*一个带有并列连词的句子,

至少一个带有从属
连词的句子,以及至少一个带有

“when”、“if”或“than”的句子。

如果你能做到,那就给自己设定一个新
目标:为每条规则写两句话,

然后写三句话,以此类推。

如果你做了第一步的工作,那么你的
写作应该是相当准确的。

但是,您还需要考虑准确性。

像第一步一样为自己设定目标
; 例如,目标是让超过 75% 的

句子没有错误,或者目标
是总共错误少于 10 个。

这里的想法是开始使用更复杂的
句型,但以可控的方式。

仍然存在规则和限制,因此
更容易专注于准确性。

但是,希望您的写作现在更
接近自然写作,具有更广泛

的句型。

在此步骤中,您可以灵活地
使用规则,使这对您来说更容易或更

困难。

如果你觉得很难,那么一开始就使用
一两个规则。

如果您觉得这一步很简单,那么您可以
使规则更复杂,例如通过使用

更广泛的连词。

您还可以添加更多规则。

当你开始这样做时,你已经准备好
进行第三步了。

第三步与第二步类似,但
需要添加更多的规则,这样你就需要

在每篇文章中使用更广泛的结构

请记住,规则不仅仅是
可以使用的; 您必须至少使用每个规则

一次。

以下是您可以添加的一些可能的规则:

使用带有“which”或
“that”的相对子句。

使用被动句。

使用第二个条件句。

使用“as…as…”进行比较

这些只是建议; 还有其他
可能!

像以前一样继续练习:找到一个任务,
写下你的答案,然后得到反馈。

如果您可以
准确地写出答案,请添加另一条规则。

如果你的准确性变得更差,那么
用相同的规则练习,直到你能写出

准确的答案。 如果你有弱点,

你可能需要在特定的语法点上工作

这就是系统; 遵循这些步骤,
你的语法会变得更强,这将

提高你的雅思写作成绩。

我们认为它对您的口语成绩也很有用

然而,我们想象你们中的一些人有问题
或反对意见,例如:“这一切需要多长时间

?”

“这似乎工作太多了!

我需要做这一切吗?”

“我真的需要老师来获得反馈吗?

”回答这些:这需要很长时间。

确切的时间量取决于您,但
预计会花费几个月的时间来解决

这个问题。

你需要做所有这些事情吗?

这取决于你的分数目标,以及
你有多少时间。

这里有一个关键事实:如果你不能
使用广泛的句型,如果

你不能准确地写出简单的句子,
那么

你的语法分数将很难超过六分。

这正是
我们遇到的许多雅思学生

所处的确切情况。

最后,您需要来自某个地方的反馈;
这是必不可少的。

反馈可以来自老师或其他地方,
但很难从其他来源获得。

如果您的雅思成绩对您很重要,
那么我们建议您寻找最好的

老师。

没有老师,你的潜在进步
会慢很多。

你还有其他提高
雅思写作语法的技巧吗?

请在评论中分享您的想法!

感谢收看!

下次见!